Hello,first time poster here.I am a graduate of a top UK university who is about to start an entry-level position with MBB in continental Europe.Although I'm pretty happy with my position, I am already considering a possible move out of my starting location as I intend to either to transition back to the UK or out of the EU (e.g. Australia/US(Canada) as soon as feasibly possible.Can anyone give me their perspective as to:a) whether this would be feasible [i]within the same firm[/i], and if so, how long it'd realistically take me; b) whether it'd be easier to pull this off by [i]transitioning laterally to a competitor[/i];c) how feasible moving to non-EU locations such as US/CAD/AUS would be for someone who has never actually lived/worked there.Thank you very much in advance.

You forgot the second bracket at the end of "Canada)"

Also, for consistency you need something in italics in point C.Plus, point C serves a different purpose to points A and B so perhaps should be part of a different list or incorporated into the text in a different way.

Also, "first" needs to be capitalised and the second paragraph contains bad grammar - "who is" should be "and I am".

I would also change "Can anyone give me" to "Please would someone give me" so as to ensure that you are asking the question you mean to be asking.

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